Vocal demo!

Jonas,

Give this some thought: On the word "I" which you use a lot, it's the first note/word of the song and it repeats a lot.

"I" is a diphthong, two syllables that are AH and EE. Ah-EE.

You're singing it like Ah-EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Try dwelling on the AH for the sustained part, nice and open, and just close it at the end of the note on a short EE.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHEE kno-o-o-o-o-o-o-ow.

Treat other diphthongs, like Youuuuuuu more like Yoooooooooooooou.

Sing on the main vowel of the diphthongs. Minimize the consonants.

By the way, this is a very nice song, and I like the sound of your voice. A little pitch owie at 0:43. You're getting better.

Bob