Demo on my version of Bob Segar Old Time Rock & Roll

@Vocality slow down.

You are anxious and that is causing you to be too fast in the song. This is very common with new karaoke singers. Relax and listen to the backing track. Do the song over and over again by yourself so you feel comfortable with it, so when you sing it it is like an old friend.

You're working to hard to not shut down your throat. Remember when we breath we automatically shut down the throat so when we are about to breath we can safely shut it down. It is important to keep an open throat through the phrase not through the entire song. Also give a little more to the consonants. It is easy do to with the front of the mouth without screwing up your throat position.

Your intonation has indeed improved, but in your nervousness you are not matching your roots to the backing track. I am very certain that this is just from you focusing on your singing and not on the entirety of the sound. It is bourne from being anxious. Once again reps.

This song is very doable for you. I think with a lot more reps on this song you will do it well. Also practicing one song to perfection is a great guide on how to replicate it with other songs.

You will definitely be able to do this song well. You "feel" it and it is fully within your range.