Please check this out.

SoeWunna

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aTFXRUQbwxU Please check my song and give some advice. Thanks a lot

doc_ramadani

Hi classmate, @SoeWunna

cool punkrock vibe. Is that an original?

Doc

SoeWunna

@doc_ramadani Of course bro. This song is written by me and its 100% original. Thank both of you for giving your time.

HuduVudu

Your post-production guy/gal did a nice job.

doc_ramadani

Also the mix sounds really professional. Great job, @SoeWunna

SoeWunna

@HuduVudu Yes bro. He did mixing and mastering for my song with great effort. Thank you.

[Deleted User]

What type of advice are you looking for?

[Deleted User]

It was good I liked it. It had kind of a Green Day quality to it.

What are your plans on promotion for it?

Peace

doc_ramadani

Hi @SoeWunna,

I liked it, too. Very punky and unconventional, but very professional production and mastering. It reminded my of a very cool punkrock band I listened to in my youth. Being really seasoned these times they came up with a new album witch I really liked. They are called "Die Ärzte" which should be translated as "The Doctors". Here is the translation of the lyrics:

https://lyricstranslate.com/en/waldspaziergang-mit-folgen-walk-through-forrest-consequences.html

I was walking through the forrest, I just had to get out
there lying around I saw a piece of wood looking holy,
so I picked it up, took it home with me
and carved a God out of it

Then I put my god into the shelf
Where he got a nice view over the world
And as long as he doesn't promise things he won't keep afterwards
I gotta admit, that I like him quite well
even if others say, that's not normal
I got a God in my shelf

It didn't take long for wonders to happen
I became incredible rich and even more incredible beautiful
I made the feeble run and the blind see
and I myself could walk over water of course

I put a God into my shelf
And I hope he won't fall down from there
And as long as he doesn't promise anything he won't keep afterwards
He's an enrichment for this world
Even though others say I'm not quite sane
I've got a God (a God, a God) at home in my shelf

Now I have everything: fame, fortune and power
but everybody know's how such things come to an end
So some night I took him
and brought him back into the forrest

I put a god into my shelf
I wouldn't have thought that I liked him so much
And as long as he stood there he was my hero
I thought he was the best God of the world
other people had books, that'd be to normal for me
I had a God (yes, yes a God) at home in my shelf

Here is the video:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u_L-bk2UcO0

Doc

SoeWunna

@doc_ramadani Wow...!!! Such a cool song. I love it. I'm gonna download their hit songs soon. Thanks for the comment.....!!1 Cheers....!!!

highmtn

Sounds like you're on a good track, SoeWunna!

SoeWunna

@highmtn Thank you.....! Mr.Tamplin keeps encouraging me.

Skatergirl46

I like the song and the way that you sang it!

SoeWunna

@iking We haven't signed yet. Our band is from Myanmar and this video is directed by our famous local director.

SoeWunna

@iking True....!!! We are getting more open than it was in the past.

SoeWunna

@doc_ramadani Thanks for being kind.

SoeWunna

@videoace Actually, I want someone to comment about my voice and my song.

SoeWunna

@videoace I just posted my video on Facebook page and I boosted it. This is so far for now. I'm looking for a production company in my country. Thanks for the comment. Cheers....!!!