Baker Street (Metal version) Open throat

Trying to keep my throat open and relaxed here, but don't really know what I'm doing, so I thought I'd check with the experts here whether my throat sounds sort of relaxed or not? Thanks a lot for any critique.
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nice job. I couldn't hear any straining. With the distorted vocals it is hard to tell if the sound is open enough.
Doc
This can help with the consonant issue:
Hope that helps