Heaven Come for Me (Original Song)

Mwight

Hey KTVA fam,



Here's a song I'm working on. The bridge isn't done yet, and I feel like the music in the chorus needs a little more rhythm to equal the interest of the verse, but I actually kinda like this one vocally and musically.

Feel free to critique, and if anyone has suggestions in lyric writing or in melody, I wanna hear it. I really do feel the chorus needs revision to be better instrument wise.

Sincerely,
Michael Wight

doc_ramadani

HI Michael,

nice to see you again. Sounds good, but I agree that the chorus should sound a little bit wider. First I would try to double the guitar (one an octave higher) and pan them hard left and right. Maybe you should also use another pickup or a different guitar. What about some harmonies?

I like how you worked on the distortion - sounds cool.

Doc

Mwight

Thanks Doc! I'll give it a shot on those guitars see if I can make it sound wider.

Claude77

Very nice song!

I think it has a lot of potential but I can't help on how to develop it from here.
I used to play in bands where we were playing original music our approach was always trying to build up the song during rehearsal.
C.

Chris82

Yeah I'm not a songwriter so I don't think I would be much help. I really do like your voice!

Mwight

Thank you @Chris82 , @Claude77 . I really appreciate the feedback. I’m going to post the final version of the song now.

Sina

On the first ... without too much analysis .. nice voice .. but a little pitchy!