Heaven Come for Me (Original Song)
Mwight
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Hey KTVA fam,
Here's a song I'm working on. The bridge isn't done yet, and I feel like the music in the chorus needs a little more rhythm to equal the interest of the verse, but I actually kinda like this one vocally and musically.
Feel free to critique, and if anyone has suggestions in lyric writing or in melody, I wanna hear it. I really do feel the chorus needs revision to be better instrument wise.
Sincerely,
Michael Wight
Here's a song I'm working on. The bridge isn't done yet, and I feel like the music in the chorus needs a little more rhythm to equal the interest of the verse, but I actually kinda like this one vocally and musically.
Feel free to critique, and if anyone has suggestions in lyric writing or in melody, I wanna hear it. I really do feel the chorus needs revision to be better instrument wise.
Sincerely,
Michael Wight
Comments
nice to see you again. Sounds good, but I agree that the chorus should sound a little bit wider. First I would try to double the guitar (one an octave higher) and pan them hard left and right. Maybe you should also use another pickup or a different guitar. What about some harmonies?
I like how you worked on the distortion - sounds cool.
Doc
I think it has a lot of potential but I can't help on how to develop it from here.
I used to play in bands where we were playing original music our approach was always trying to build up the song during rehearsal.
C.