I'd be grateful for getting some feedback of my Bohemian Rhapsody and I see fire singing.

ElGreco

Hello everyone. I'm new here and I would be glat for getting some feedback from more experienced forum users I'm singing just about six months. I recorded every song by one take - I wanted to every mistake be pointed, maybe then it would be possible to find the cause Before all the recordings I did only basic warm-up, when I do solid one some of mistakes don't occures. I didn't used any effects, just noise gate because my mic sucks Would you, please, give me some feedback about my singing technique and overall? Bohemian Rhapsody by Queen and Ed Sheeran's I see fire are the songs I want you to present. Sorry also for lyrics mistakes and out of tempo parts. That's the links:
https://clyp.it/yzfdu1ki?token=110ce0456bb3f1d22974eba66201879d
https://clyp.it/3puambj3?token=1210f7fdffe391a90c3389e7ee324ed3

HuduVudu

Hey Greco,

Listened to your songs. Looks like you have your work cut out for you
The two main issues that I see from your examples are that you do not have correct diaphragmatic support and you are not singing with an open throat. The best way for me to help you with what those are is to let Ken do the talking.

So here is Ken talking about these two very important issues:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wv3T-xA28fE


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N64nvAbgO6k

ElGreco

@HuduVudu Thank you so much for your reply. I will focus on this issues next days and will record the new version to check if it were corrected

HuduVudu

ElGreco FYI, these are not issues that you are going to be fixed quickly. This process takes time and lots of it. Relax slow down and try to carefully work out this issues in your practice routine. In time you will get them corrected.

ElGreco

HuduVudu said:

ElGreco FYI, these are not issues that you are going to be fixed quickly. This process takes time and lots of it. Relax slow down and try to carefully work out this issues in your practice routine. In time you will get them corrected.

Yeah, I know that isn't easy, I worked a lot to force with them before. I can sing with open throat and also use a Diaphragmatic support (obviously there's I'm far away from perfection), just sometimes when I sing Iautomatically do it in wrong way. I don't know why it's happens. I will be working on this, just want you to could compare how I sound without focusing about this and within, so I will be able to get on the right pat, so I will record another try later.