Time acoustic cover Pink Floyd

Claude77

Hello guys,

a couple of months ago I recorded this amazing song from Pink Floyd but never loaded here in the forum.
Please have a listen and give me your feedback.
As always I am here to learn and get better on singing so if you have time and want to give me your constructive feedback I will review them and try to apply.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1S1AeRA1ojLx3ICuBKqkdDo9ACwW6VSb_

Claudio

doc_ramadani

Hi Claudio, @Claude77

very nice that you show up here. But, mate, you chose a very hard song to sing, from my point of view.

I think it is a very decent snapshot of your learning process. Good musical feeling. Pitch is decent but needs some improvements. This may be a matter of time (and constant practice). But you know that pitch is also one of MY big problems.

For the singing technique:

for me it sounds a little bit pinched at squeezed as you are singing in the higher regions. Really watch to keep your throat open and sing from the diaphragm. For me it help a lot to practice in front of a mirror an to monitor my throat. Also I would like to hear more support and good resonance (with good cord closure).

I would recommend to you that you post a demo (video preferred) of the basic LAH triad scale of Volume 1 in 2 versions:

- one bridging into head voice
- one stretching chest voice

A lot of things can be seen from these scales. Maybe we can give you even better advice if we can hear you LAH scales.

Keep on working, you voice will grow, mate.

Doc

Claude77

Hi Marco @doc_ramadani and thanks a lot for taking the time to listen and comment.

Unfortunately at the moment I cannot make a recording of myself doing the LAH scale but I can provide my last recording I did for review.

Here you have the regular LAH scale
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1e6FVHdkh9iTdGCako0Na7VeDJF0Dmas2

Here you have LAH long scale
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1JenY_sIRcb_SUsXJQvhFz5otB23uagl5

And here you have LAH vocal tract shaping
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1LlwDTu6LzE34l41-5k7ziu4-c17M999g

I made those recording more or less 4 months ago.

It would be nice to receive some tips and advices from some more experienced KTVA students and/or singer and please don't get me wrong, I really appreciate your help but I have been a student of KTVA for 2.5 years and I made a lot of progress that really chanced my voice so hearing some more experienced opinions could help.

Just to give you an idea about how much I chanced here you have a LAH scale I recorded maybe when I started (not sure about it but it's kind of old).


Thanks again for your help.
C.