Queen of pain- Devil Doll Cover

Maia

Learning this for part of an audition I've got in January, let me know if you've got feedback
https://photos.app.goo.gl/RLnaGGgd3L7DSXqRA
Thanks

doc_ramadani

HI @Maia

thanks for post this demo. Personally I would try to brighten the low notes more. To my ear you cover the sound to much. Even if the parts are very low do not forget to engage your support. I am sure that you can do much better.

Doc

Maia

Thanks doc. I will keep trying @doc_ramadani

Maia

Hi @doc_ramadani think this went better, not perfect yet but better
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1tpg7Fbl5MpDpt3_7Lljlh775u-4jAkq4/view?usp=sharing

doc_ramadani

Hi @Maia,

definitely better, but try to brighten it up even more (for the beginning). You can morph the tone later on when you are able to sing it very bright and clean.

Doc

Chris82

@Maia Good improvements! I really like your passion for singing and I can tell you really get into the songs when you sing!

I thought you did really good with tour use of vocal fry in the song.

Have you tried singing it without singing along to the artist?

Maia

Hi @Chris82 thanks for your feedback!!
Yes I have, there's not a good karaoke version unfortunately and I try playing piano along to it but then I find it harder to focus on the vocals more specifically. Have been attempting it a capella with a metronome as well