Only the Good Die Young

Hi All, can you please give me some feedback and critique on this recording? This is me singing and playing piano at the same time along to a drum backing track.
Thanks, Michael
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Thanks, Michael
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thanks for putting a smile to my face. I never heard this song before. You present it with good energy. Your timing got much, MUCH better, mate. Kudos.
I get the point Chris mentions. I agree that you could brighten your sound a little more. And I want to add that, to my ear, you are bringing a lot of weight in the higher range. Try to reduce the volume (and power) you need to go higher and let resonance take over. I have the same problem and Ken could demonstrate me within minutes during my first 1-on-1 session that a lot of problems I was having come from singing too loud. You will need TONS of support to do so.
Doc
i think maybe you could bring down the tempo a bit, not sure if it is the drums, but sometimes it sounds a bit hectic to me.
and in the choruses, i think it would be nice if the long held chords would sound a bit more powerful, it might be the piano preset.
where the lyrics are "brand new soul" and after, there is something off with the timing on the piano.
i realize I am not saying anything about the singing. because it sounds pretty good to me!
Yes I'm building a live set for performance. Doc I'm guessing Billy Joel never became popular in Germany, he is a HUGE success in the US and this is certainly one of his greatest hits. Glad you were introduced to this song.
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Nice job. I think the second version is better. I would like to hear you lean into the notes a little more, especially the F#4's and G#4's. with more support. Those notes are just a skoshe flat unless you support them sufficiently. I agree with Klaus that you could lighten up on the consonants to help the overall flow of air to be unimpeded.
Bob