Feedback needed

Here's two from me. I never post bec I'm hyper critical but if I don't I'll only have my opinion. I will note that I've only been active in the lessons for a few days and have already noticed a good change in transitional vowels. Thanks in advance for your feedback
Moon River
https://www.smule.com/p/787571382_3382713036
"All I Could Do Was Cry" https://www.smule.com/p/787571382_3382734927
Moon River
https://www.smule.com/p/787571382_3382713036
"All I Could Do Was Cry" https://www.smule.com/p/787571382_3382734927
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