I would really like any criticism of this. Led Zeppelin studio cover. Older.

I'm sure there are some things I'm doing wrong. Please let me know if you can recognize any mistakes I'm making. The recording was done on an older boss 8 track digital recording studio but I want technique advice about singing. Thanks in advance.
https://youtu.be/KCLmhYJ6hQg

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It's possible it's just certain countries, I'm Australian. It's happened before.
it is blocked in Germany too.
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