Aerosmith- What it Takes

Hi All, can you please give me some feedback on this recording? The ending kind of drags out, I'm going to shorten that....
Thanks, Michael
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Thanks, Michael
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AvqpmhkVjP-MinY8zcTpUiWihNG-
@HuduVudu @doc_ramadani @Vocality @bentk @iking @Diego @highmtn @Gaston_Jauregui @Sophia @victortang @Klaus_T @Furious_Phil @Ken Tamplin @Wigs @Maximus3000 @Jáchym @cwcw @reallydanny @SlaySomething @Rick_amateur @samw2019 @blondiewales @maximgottmer @KenfromCZ @bonvie56 @sjonrokz4u @Chris82 @coffeecrank @JackLeininger
Comments
I don`t know how to describe the sound now, but I guess it would be nasal. Correct me if I`m wrong.
Musically, I would like the notes at the end of the phrases to be a bit longer. SIngers have the gift of sustain, which many other instruments can`t brag about. Use it!