Elton John- Why they Call it the Blues

Michael4000

Hi All, Can you please tell me what you think of this?

Thanks! Michael

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d1g2w3

Hey Michael,

Lower notes are great, awesome resonance. You need to hold onto some of those notes a little longer.
Where it starts to weaken, is the "higher" notes. I didn't think these notes would be too high for you but you seem to lose a lot of air. I suspect this is your support giving way while concentrating on a more dynamic piece. I think you need to work on that. I think you also lose the placement, Elton really powers those out and it seems a little tame

Only other thing I noticed was the minor clip of a note at the start

The song and playing was great though, once you've mastered it I think it will be great live.

Danny

Michael4000

@d1g2w3 thanks!

Michael4000

@d1g2w3 what exactly are you hearing at the clip of a note at the start?

d1g2w3

I had a listen back and I think I'm wrong, I think it's an arpaggiated chord at about 12 seconds in

Wigs

I couldn't hear the clipping at the start. After my last upload for critique and the feed back I received, I realised I wasn't doing what I was suggesting to alot of people, namely my contiguous phrasing and use of vowel mods. These are things you can still improve upon as well, its a little bit staccato and even though the notes aren't high, I think you are bringing up the pure vowel a bit too much.

Michael4000

@Wigs thanks

Chris82

I liked it @Michael4000 This song suits your voice quite well!

Michael4000

@Chris82 thanks!

jmstanle

That was really impressive @Michael4000! I don't know how you can play like that AND sing. Sometimes you really sing from your heart and get lost in it and that's when I go ahhhhhhhhhhh! I love those parts. Keep it up!

Michael4000

@jmstanle thanks!