Please review my demo song

aarsenault12

HI everybody, i've written a song and would like your opinion (singing of course), but on the song would be also be appreciated .

Wigs

I have a feeling I know the band you might draw inspiration form but I can't think of the name. I know nothing about creating song structures so I'll only comment on your vocals. Overall your pitch is good, but there are some obvious flat spots you will need to work on for the final product. If the slightly airy head voice is an artistic choice that's fine, if not then working on support and cord closure over all will brighten up your sound. You hang onto the vowels well to keep an open throat and get contiguous phrasing. Nice one. I hope to start writing music soon.