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kevinwayne

An example of me doing a cover. Thanks for listening~!

sjonrokz4u

I can’t get it to play

kevinwayne

sjonrokz4u said:

I can’t get it to play

Can't imagine why. Did you try downloading it?

kevinwayne

@sjonrokz4u Try it now. I guess it's better not to use html with a Soundcloud link?

Wigs

Your voice is a bit too quiet to make out properly. Was there anything specific you wanted comments on? Or just happy to share?

kevinwayne

Wigs said:

Your voice is a bit too quiet to make out properly. Was there anything specific you wanted comments on? Or just happy to share?

Apologies. The problem should be fixed now if you'd like to try again

shining

I like this Song from Cure...
As far as I can tell and to be honest: You should work on your pitch. Most of the notes you sing are wrong.
If I wouldn´t have known that this should be "Love Song" I wouldn´t have recognized it.

kevinwayne

shining said:

I like this Song from Cure...
As far as I can tell and to be honest: You should work on your pitch. Most of the notes you sing are wrong.
If I wouldn´t have known that this should be "Love Song" I wouldn´t have recognized it.

Are you saying the note are wrong from the original melody line, or that they don't fit with the key of the song? To me it sounds like it's in key, but that could be a misperception of mine.

shining

The notes of the melody you sing ... sorry my english is not so good.

kevinwayne

shining said:

The notes of the melody you sing ... sorry my english is not so good.

No problem, and hey thanks for replying~!

kevinwayne

Okay so I changed part of the melody line to make it more like the way Robert Smith sings it. I think it's an important distinction: Adele changes it up a lot on this song. But is she 'off pitch?' Nobody in their right mind would claim that. To me this sounds fine in relation to the original chords, but if you think otherwise feel free to drop the hammer~!

aarsenault12

there's something interesting, i like the chorus, i would personnaly check the pitch though, keep it up!

shining

I didn´t even know there is a version from Adele.
I only know the original version from the 80s from "The Cure".

Just listenend to Adele.. the melody she sings is very close to the original... just much slower.

kevinwayne

shining said:

I didn´t even know there is a version from Adele.
I only know the original version from the 80s from "The Cure".

Just listenend to Adele.. the melody she sings is very close to the original... just much slower.

I believe there is a significant change in the way she sings the bridge. The two melody lines at that point aren't even close.

kevinwayne

New updated mix for those interested