My latest cover of Sweet Child O' Mine

shining

Hey there!

I just listenend to Kayla Reeves version she just did with Ken
And I wonder what you think of my latest cover?
Unfortunately I don´t have any distortion yet so it sounds brighter and clearer..?
Please give me some Feedback of what you think what else I should work on to do it better:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5M-Ap6oMHs0

Wigs

You did really well with this! For some reason, this song in particular has made you able to keep your larynx in a much better position that what Ive heard previously. One thing that I think you could do a bit less is your use of "h". I know its used to keep the throat open but in the beginning on words like cry at 1:11, try hold the vowel longer or come back into the vowel with alot less H or even none at all. The throat is already open. Its a personal thing for me and im trying to minimise my use of unnecessary H's too

shining

Oh wow, thank you for pointing this "h" out ... I didn´t know that I was doing that.. and even more: that that is something I should NOT do. I will try to find a solution for that...

Wigs

I wouldn't say should not, more just dont be reliant on it

sjonrokz4u

That’s one of my goal songs. Sounds good!

Michael4000

Sounds great!

Kevin123

Very nice!