First time poster...demo for feedback pleas

mattscardiostuff

Hi all;
would love some feedback in general and regarding my "s". it doesn't seem crisp. I notice when Ken speaks his S is quite sustained (not a criticism) but when he sings it is crisp. Any advice in general and regarding the s would be helpful.

thanks
Matt

mattscardiostuff

hopefully this works

sjonrokz4u

Nope didn’t work

mattscardiostuff

mattscardiostuff

I have tried again...not sure what I am doing wrong. I will divide it up into two to see if that works
thanks for your patience
Matt
https://soundcloud.com/

matthew-bennett-540394301/matt-run-oct-2020/s-yT6ksw4fT4N

sjonrokz4u

Check in the forum heading called how to post you’re audio and video.

mattscardiostuff

mattscardiostuff

ha ha...looking at that forum post...will try another way. thanks for your patience

mattscardiostuff

mattscardiostuff

mattscardiostuff

Matthew Bennett · run

sjonrokz4u

I still can’t play it

mattscardiostuff

ended up making it public....not sure why the private stuff wasn't working

mattscardiostuff

I hope this works
@sjonrokz4u

Wigs

You've had quite a hard time getting this up

You've got nice tone and put good feeling into the song. Theres a bit of pitch to work on, but only in parts, I dont think pitch in general is a problem for you. I dont quite understand what you mean about the "s", I think during mixing, generally those get reduced a bit so that the sound isn't piercing. You would do a really good version of this in 6 months or so with a bit more perfecting of technique. Pop into the student area and post your lah scales sometime for more direct feed back regarding technique.

sjonrokz4u

It worked. I’m totally unfamiliar with how the song actually sounds

mattscardiostuff

Thanks guys (It is snow patrol's run)

I appreciate the comments
Matt