Lazlo Bane — Superman (Cover)

TH_SHT_MKR

Hi everybody!
Didn't correct the pitch. Naked vocal. Need somebody to tell me, what's wrong. 'Cause, something is definitely wrong.
Thanks forward for your thoughts and pieces advice.
https://soundcloud.com/thshtmkr/lazlo-bane-superman/s-p9740PxfYmG

Wigs

There are some things"wrong", but think of it as more of things that need adjusting to get the best out of your voice. The 2 main things are a bit too much nasality and not staying supported and in the breath. You should aim the sound from a bit further back in your throat and not lean so much in your mask. A tiny bit pitchy but overall I dont you you have pitch problems. Finding and remembering those pockets for each vowel and their note values while keeping your support will sort that out.

TH_SHT_MKR

Thank’s a lot!)

Kevin123

Nice, Lazlo. You captured a good feel with this. I agree with Wigs about the nasality, so I would work on trying to reduce that. And keep working on your intonation. Stay with it!