Hi, just heard your upload. Nice tone. But, try to keep an AH feeling in the back of your throat and then pronounce all the vowels from that placement. You are over pronouncing the vowels, like strong AH-EEH-OOH-OH-AH strong and defined vowels; when ideally you should sing the whole song as a continuous "AH" vowel with small changes in the throat in order to make the words intelligible but no more than that. Keep an AH feeling in the throat and shift from vowel to vowel ever so slightly to aproximate the desired sound, but no more.
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