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Original Song - Inhale, Exhale

Mike86Mike86 Member Posts: 72
One take acoustic/vocal played live at the same time.

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/X6Y6E

I welcome all feedback.

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  • Klaus_TKlaus_T Moderator, 2.0 PRO Posts: 1,855
    edited September 14
    hi Mike, nice song. reminds me of sublime "what i got", a little bit. i think some of the vowels sound a bit harsh or hard, you could maybe soften it a bit. not sing softer, just relax a bit more, maybe (sorry it's hard to explain what i mean). you can then use the "harsher" tones for effect in places, rather than across the whole thing. just an idea.

    keep it up! :)

  • Mike86Mike86 Member Posts: 72
    Hi Klaus,
    Thanks for the feedback and cool reference. I see what you mean, I got pretty excited during that one and could manage that intensity better or save it for the chorus only and be more conscious of the harsher tones.

    Thanks for listening.
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