Original Song - Inhale, Exhale

Mike86

One take acoustic/vocal played live at the same time.

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/X6Y6E

I welcome all feedback.

Klaus_T

hi Mike, nice song. reminds me of sublime "what i got", a little bit. i think some of the vowels sound a bit harsh or hard, you could maybe soften it a bit. not sing softer, just relax a bit more, maybe (sorry it's hard to explain what i mean). you can then use the "harsher" tones for effect in places, rather than across the whole thing. just an idea.

keep it up!

Mike86

Hi Klaus,
Thanks for the feedback and cool reference. I see what you mean, I got pretty excited during that one and could manage that intensity better or save it for the chorus only and be more conscious of the harsher tones.

Thanks for listening.