Stand Up and Shout - "Rock Star" movie

Hi There!
Here is my recent try on Stand Up and Shout - from "Rock Star" movie .
Been working on Ken`s excercises for a while.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1q8O5erdrBE&ab_channel=MikeyG.W.
Please, let me know if you like it a bit,
Mike
Here is my recent try on Stand Up and Shout - from "Rock Star" movie .
Been working on Ken`s excercises for a while.

Please, let me know if you like it a bit,
Mike
Comments
How long you been working on your rasp?
thank you for your comment !!
I ve been trying to work on the rasp from the beginning in 2010
mike
With such a distorted tone, it can be easy to be slightly under pitch and not know it. Consider focusing on each note with that bright ping AH and no distortion using a pitch tuner if needed (eventually you want to be able to hear pitch without the tuner).
It looks like you are raising your larynx in some spots. I caution you to go through your checklist of releasing all tension to make sure you are producing your tone in a comfortable and healthy way.
Hope this is helpful.
Keep up the great work!