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michaelmusicmichaelmusic 2.0 ENROLLED Posts: 271
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Hello Everyone, how do you think I could improve with this song? Include maybe a few good points and notes of improvement about elements like pitch, tone, vibrato, support, strength, breath, etc. Thank you!
https://youtu.be/HzhoYMpAmX4
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  • michaelmusicmichaelmusic 2.0 ENROLLED Posts: 271
    Tagging @Klaus_T @highmtn @Wigs
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  • highmtnhighmtn Administrator, Moderator, Enrolled, Pro, 3.0 Streaming Posts: 15,384
    I really like your tone. Nice and crisp. This sounds really good as a dry recording. A tiny touch of effects like reverb would make it shine, but it sounds really nice just as it is.

    There are a few places in the passaggio that need a little more support, just before you go all the way into head voice. This is not an easy song to do well. You did a good job on it. Watch the pitch in the head voice notes.
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  • michaelmusicmichaelmusic 2.0 ENROLLED Posts: 271
    Yes I wanted to have a dry sound so people could here the voice better. Good points on the head voice pitch thank you.
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  • WigsWigs Moderator, 2.0 PRO, 3.0 Streaming Posts: 5,042
    I reckon if you spent time with this and could sing it by memory you will free up more expression and freedom. Solid command on your range and tone, just a few tweaks here and there. Good job on not getting caught up in your throat with this and keeping everything open.
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