Original song: "on the other side"

josiahmarineau

Hi all!

I am guitarist/composer primarily, and trying to learn to sing because people like songs with vocals more than instrumentals. I discovered Ken's videos on YouTube and thought to join this forum to get feedback on my songwriting and singing.

Here is my latest song: https://www.bandlab.com/post/2b73ed13-980a-ed11-b47a-281878315d59

Feedback is welcome and appreciated! In particular, what do you enjoy about the song? What is distracting or unenjoyable about it? Any tips or thoughts on the singing?

Thanks in advance!

-Josiah Marineau