I performed my original for other singer/songwriters

michaelmusic

There was a local singer/songwriter showcase and I performed an original of mine. Can you let me know what you think of my vocal performance and songwriting? I am looking to develop myself as an original artist and want feedback on how to improve.

Improvements I want to make right now are around my uniqueness as an original artist. I am trying to find what my distinct style is and what type of songs I should be writing. This song specifically I am considering putting more time into recording.
https://youtu.be/zazLT4CW5F8

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