Brown Eyed Girl (piano vocal cover)

Michael4000

Hi All,

Can you please give me some feedback on this recording?

Thanks!

Michael

https://1drv.ms/f/c/8cff8c15199aa9fa/EkYZ5vhbuDJOlKKtG9TrJxkBr4RhDNh1Pd8zf506ll-0Uw?e=EW6jRA


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Klaus_T

Hi Michael, i listened to your latest uploads, really good work. great you are still working on your music and making progress.

what i noticed in your recordings:
i found that sometimes the piano sounds a bit choppy, you have some nice shuffled rhythms but it sounds like you are trying to keep up and then it sounds a bit rushed for a moment. not sure if you wanted to hear piano criticism anyway i think smoothing that out and maybe try to work in more dynamics (hitting the keys a bit lighter here and there) would make it even better and round out the whole thing. great playing overall so please don't get me wrong

the la di da part in the bridge maybe sounded a bit over-enunciated but probably just my taste.

nice to hear some of your stuff again. best wishes, Klaus

Michael4000

@Klaus_T thanks for your feedback— I’ll definitely work on the piano dynamics. What do you think the vocals?

Klaus_T

i like it! are you playing this live to audiences?

Michael4000

@Klaus_T hopefully I’ll be ready with my complete setlist in about six months. It’s 45 songs and everything is memorized— piano music and lyrics.

Klaus_T

oh wow. sounds like a big project. curious to hear more