Singer / Songwriter Performance Original Song

Hello Everybody!
What a year it's been. I booked 15 private events and weddings this year. When starting this course April 2021 people DID NOT want to hear me sing. Now I probably made a total of $8,000 (conservative estimate) this year from performing music part-time on the weekends.
2025 is going to be the best year yet! I'm starting off the year with several singer/songwriter original performances at Writer's Rounds and open mics and playing a showcase called Breaking Sound in Los Angeles.
I want to reach 1M people with my original music in 5 years. Below is a recording of me at Campus Jax in Costa Mesa. Can you share feedback on this performance?
https://youtu.be/bl5ahKf1u6I
Some of my thoughts:
What a year it's been. I booked 15 private events and weddings this year. When starting this course April 2021 people DID NOT want to hear me sing. Now I probably made a total of $8,000 (conservative estimate) this year from performing music part-time on the weekends.
2025 is going to be the best year yet! I'm starting off the year with several singer/songwriter original performances at Writer's Rounds and open mics and playing a showcase called Breaking Sound in Los Angeles.
I want to reach 1M people with my original music in 5 years. Below is a recording of me at Campus Jax in Costa Mesa. Can you share feedback on this performance?

Some of my thoughts:
- I'm ducking high notes because I am not creating maximum space in my mouth
- I'm not using good fundamentals with breath, posture, open throat, and lowered jaw
- I'm looking too much at my phone
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