Hotel California piano/vocal cover

Hi All,
Can you please give me some feedback on this recording?
Thanks!
Michael
https://1drv.ms/u/c/8cff8c15199aa9fa/EYWovsJ5FoJBt-QSaLCXeSgB60vpb30X-k-0BWWLWEi5Bg?e=OY2VH3
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Can you please give me some feedback on this recording?
Thanks!
Michael
https://1drv.ms/u/c/8cff8c15199aa9fa/EYWovsJ5FoJBt-QSaLCXeSgB60vpb30X-k-0BWWLWEi5Bg?e=OY2VH3
@HuduVudu @doc_ramadani @Vocality @bentk @iking @Diego @highmtn @Gaston_Jauregui @Sophia @victortang @Klaus_T @Furious_Phil @Ken Tamplin @Wigs @Maximus3000 @Jáchym @cwcw @reallydanny @SlaySomething @Rick_amateur @samw2019 @blondiewales @maximgottmer @KenfromCZ @bonvie56 @sjonrokz4u @Chris82 @coffeecrank @JackLeininger @Perriard @shining @d1g2w3 @jmstanle @charlie_v
Comments
As a song for singing in a club, I think it’s fine. I’m not sure you need repeated feedback for songs to this effect.
If you’re looking for more detailed feedback about singing technique, you’re generally in pitch, but the higher notes aren’t as strong, so you need to keep developing the passagio. But there isn’t any clear benefit in posting loads of different songs, which all have the same issues. It would be better to repost short clips of the relevant sections.
Can I also ask you to trim the intro out: I want to hear your voice, not the piano!
Please confirm your aims in seeking feedback. 🤗
Even better, take clips of the bits you want feedback on.
Even even better, do some analysis yourself first. Adult learning is all about awareness. The more you can identify your strengths & weaknesses, the quicker you’ll learn! 🤩