Feedback on live demo BEST PART by HER

michaelmusic

Hey all! Just recorded this live demo of the song Best Part by Her.

I struggled playing this last week at my gig so I wanted to improve it. Can i get some feedback here on how to make it great?
https://youtube.com/shorts/yq1_PIwYNHI

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Terence

I like it already, @michaelmusic If you can reliably get into head voice on "coffee" I wouldn't change a thing but to make it as light and heady as possible as a contrast to the verses.

If not, perhaps take it back to the original key of D and create some interesting riffs on the chorus from D4-G4.