Looking for feedback please
I just did the first verse and chorus of Ladder Song by Bright Eyes. Any tips on how I can improve would be much appreciated.
https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/6ec9945e-d0cb-f011-8196-000d3a96100f?sharedKey=UqJny3gUoEeHhnLB2XAHZA
https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/6ec9945e-d0cb-f011-8196-000d3a96100f?sharedKey=UqJny3gUoEeHhnLB2XAHZA