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hi all. my name is james and i need some advice on a song i am working on.

tomorrowswednesdaytomorrowswednesday Pro Posts: 3
edited June 2014 in GENERAL SINGING - Ken Tamplin Vocal Academy Forum
i have been trying to record this song for a few months and i am trying to see what i can do to make it better. any advice would be amazing.

the sound of glass
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  • tomorrowswednesdaytomorrowswednesday Pro Posts: 3

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  • highmtnhighmtn Administrator, Moderator, Enrolled, Pro, 3.0 Streaming Posts: 15,384

    @tomorrowswednesday,

    Hi, James!

     

    The basic song is good. The background voices sound pretty interesting.

    It would be nice to maybe open up the sound on your main vocal a little more like you've done with the background vocals.  Your main vocal sounds a bit narrow and closed.  Perhaps that's what you wanted, I don't know. 

    It sounds like you need a bit more vocal technique to sound more comfortable with your voice.  You're on-pitch for the most part, but the tone just sounds a bit pinched.  Opening up the vocal tract and singing with an open-throat technique would be helpful.

     

    Bob

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  • tomorrowswednesdaytomorrowswednesday Pro Posts: 3
    thank you. i will try to do that. i still am having a hard time getting comfortable, so hopefully soon.
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