I really like the sound of your voice. You have a nice vibrato and the song works well for you.
I think you are doing a great job.
I'd like to hear you "dig in" a little more with confidence.
You can clearly hear the technique working for you (this is not an easy song to sing).
Some of it sounds stiff like you are "thinking" about it too hard.
Enjoy the song and give us more. Lean into it a little more.
Try to treat it a little more soul than paint by numbers of what you know "technically" to be true and what your heart wants to sing