Hi, Tom, good to hear from you.
You are doing a lot with your vocal tone, and it's sounding good. There are a couple of small places where the pitch is just a skoshe questionable, like at 0:25 on "all" (which is a bend, but it makes the listener question it). You have to be careful about bend notes, they are kind of a moving target all their own.
I would slow down the vibrato down a bit to help to sound more relaxed.
I really like how your voice is beginning to mature. I think you're getting into the finer qualities and exploring what you can do with your sound. The mix is good. Your voice is sitting just right in the mix.
All the Best, Tom!