critique my singing! please!

JonasFinnLarsson

Hey!

Please tell me what i can work on with my singing.
I posted a demo before on this forum about half a year ago, and i have to say that i've grown alot since then all thanks to this program, my effort and this forum.
 I couldn't sing in tune at all before

But anyways please let me know what i can work

The song is an idea i came up with a couple of months ago.



Thanks !

highmtn

@JonasFinnLarson,

Your guitar is actually covering your voice up a bit too much.  The song sounds good, and what I can hear of your voice sounds good, but the guitar needs to come down in the blend to be able to zero in on your voice a little better.  If you are using only one mic, please move it closer to your face and a little further from your guitar.  We need to hear the details of your voice more.

Thanks, Bro!

 

Bob