Inspired by Ken

Hey
I was inspired by Ken to try a little of She's Gone by SteelHeart, great song. I missed out the chorus as I am trying to work on the verse first. Please let me know what you think and what can be improved. I really struggle going through my mixed voice and want to stretch chest a little further.
Thanks
Comments
Sounds pretty decent, Jamie. I was waiting for you to keep going in the chorus. Nice run on the G4, B4, E5, G5.
This is not the easiest song in the world to tackle.
Bob