Hi! Critique my singing please :)

JonasFinnLarsson

Got another song and vocal demo for you to critique

This forum is gold for getting feedback

If want to give some pointers on the song that would be great aswell

Here it is

highmtn

The link on this one isn't working, Jonas.

JonasFinnLarsson

oh now its working

highmtn

@JonasFinnLarsson,

At about 0:34 "Ordinary" seems a little pitchy.

At 1:05 when you let go of your hum, the pitch falls out of tune.  Hold your support there until after you cut off the note.

Same thing at the release of "mind" at 1:44.

Nice tune.  I like it.

Bob