Vocal demo

JonasFinnLarsson

I posted this song before and got feedback from bob.

I've worked on it now and it would be nice with some more feedback on it!

I've used my support alot more than before and i am trying to keep a good posture.

Here it is



What should i work on?

highmtn

Getting a little too much room noise (or effects, whichever it is) in this recording makes it a little harder to hear your voice over the reverb of the room. I'd like to hear your voice a little more dominant in the recording.  If you aren't using effects, try moving a little closer to the mic so there won't be so much ambient noise in the track.

Overall, it's still coming along and sounding good. 

@1:40 - 1:41 watch out, your pitch got lost there.  Practice that transition that's happening there until you sound more sure of yourself there. 

Good Job.

Bob