Crit me please, looking for feedback. Wonderwall

bnosam
bnosam Member Posts: 8
edited September 2015 in VOCAL DEMONSTRATIONS for the Bold!
I did cover a bit of Wonderwall. The vocals have no effects on them besides a bit of EQ and compression.
At the 3-4 second mark I lost my balance when I was standing on a mic cord so "you" sounds weird so ignore that part.

https://www.soundcloud.com/masonb/wonderpartnoeffects/s-Uvnqb

Any criticisms or help is appreciated, thanks!
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  • highmtn
    highmtn Administrator, Moderator, Enrolled, Pro, 3.0 Streaming Posts: 15,048
    This sounds pretty good. The section from about 0:58 to 1:02 has a little bit of pitch issues, but otherwise you pretty much nailed it.

    All the Best.

    Bob
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  • bnosam
    bnosam Member Posts: 8
    To me it always sounds like my voice isn't bright enough. Maybe it's just me being overly critical, but it seems like my voice still kind of lacks clarity and power?

    Thank you for your reply btw.
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  • highmtn
    highmtn Administrator, Moderator, Enrolled, Pro, 3.0 Streaming Posts: 15,048
    Your voice could benefit from a brighter tone, in general. This particular tune seems to fit the approach you used on it. It's a very wordy song, and loaded with short syllables and consonants. That makes it a little difficult to do a more detailed evaluation of your vocal technique.

    It still sounds pretty good. : ^)

    Bob
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