New song, Vocal demo

JonasFinnLarsson

So I made this today and I haven't posted a thread here for a while. So here it is



It is an original and i wonder what I should do with my voice... feels like I should be more dynamic or something, i dont know.

Please tell me what you think

/Jonas

highmtn

Jonas,

Your voice is wavering a lot in this tune. Your support is inconsistent, and the pitch follows the support, so that causes your notes to go up and down in pitch. This would be true on the F, G, A, Bb, and C at different places.

Even though you are singing in a soft mode, you still need support, or your notes will lose their consistency. Support is how we keep our air pressure at the proper amounts so that the pitch doesn't waver or go sharp and flat.

It's a nice song, but you need to maintain your support so that the pitch won't vary and waver.

All the Best!

Bob

JonasFinnLarsson

Thanks Bob. I will work more on support, maybe that is all I should be working on now. Thanks again.