Sam Smith Vocal Sample

Can I get some feedback, Anything good,bad, neutral is good feedback 
https://soundcloud.com/jeffoh2015/sam-smith-im-not-the-only-one
Im just wondering if my technique is correct?
i think im off key i will upload another.

https://soundcloud.com/jeffoh2015/sam-smith-im-not-the-only-one
Im just wondering if my technique is correct?
i think im off key i will upload another.
Comments
hi, im actually singing quieter and i will try to upload a backing track. I usually sing with the sound hitting the top of my mouth, tongue dropped and basically use ktva technique. In this sample i tryed lowering the volume but i think it didnt work out quite right, i wil upload another sample asap.
thank you all.