Vocal demo, original song.

JonasFinnLarsson

Hi! I wanted to share this song i've been working on. I've reworked it alot, right now I just wanna enjoy it as it is.



I really didn't think about how I sang I just sang so there might be things to improve.

I deeply appreciate any comments

JonasFinnLarsson

I'm gonna rework this with vocaltract shaping and supporting more. I know this is not supported enough.

highmtn

You knew what I was going to say... :^)

JonasFinnLarsson

Yay! Way ahead of you
I was going for feeling more on this one. It's hard to have everything working together and still get meaning behind the words.

highmtn

It's an interesting song.

JonasFinnLarsson

highmtn said:

It's an interesting song.

Thanks bob that means alot!

highmtn

You write some introspective stuff. There is always an element of mood or other feeling that is conveyed. Pretty cool that you can express those things in song.

JonasFinnLarsson

highmtn said:

You write some introspective stuff. There is always an element of mood or other feeling that is conveyed. Pretty cool that you can express those things in song.

I try to go on what words fits most with the chords and it usually just comes out as you said introspective. The drawback is that the lyrics gets a little shaky and dont have a ground to stand on. I should work on making the song a bit more stable and really convey what I feel very delibrate. It might change when my life becomes a bit more stable. I dont know haha. I'm glad you commented. It is nice to hear you saying the truth about what you like about my song. Thank you!

JonasFinnLarsson

highmtn said:

You write some introspective stuff. There is always an element of mood or other feeling that is conveyed. Pretty cool that you can express those things in song.

Would be cool to hear how you write your music