You actually did a pretty good job on it. On the "Here..." notes on the chorus you might want to push down on your diaphragm to help you get that note a little more stable.
Man you've got GREAT tone. Even the pinched off parts to your singing that you'd prob want to open up on - really I think it's coming from doing a spot on impersonation of Bowie from that era, before he learned to open up on his throat himself.
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Great great cover. Can't wait to hear more.
Read the song description before.
Good job!