how is my first 2 verses of hallelujiah?

Jonnyquick

https://youtu.be/PxlKTAsfE50

any tips would help.
if your wondering its in A

[Deleted User]

It sounded pretty good. The audio had some type of phase going on with it, but the singing itself was good.
On a personal note: I found myself laughing because at the end of singing "hallelujiah", your guitar fell over or something, and the first thing you said was............lol

Peace, Tony

Jonnyquick

thanks so much tony! actually it was my keyboard but ya lol on the phase sound? my web cam is the devil

highmtn

Good job at getting in front of the camera and giving it a go. The audio is a little muddy, but your voice in general is good. Do try to go for a little brighter sound. You can always darken it if you want to, but strive for more presence and brilliance in the tone.