This sounds like a four pillars exercise. MMMMMMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!
Kinda like asking Robert Lunte to critique your "It's the Lah, AH!"
Not that I'm an authority on his methods, but it sounds like you need to be more connected on these. In other words, there is a gap between the lows and the highs where it jumps and skips a portion of the slide.
Cyon, I haven't done any clips of exercises. You've probably already heard the two tunes I did a couple of months ago.
I'll be posting more as I get a chance to put something together. I want to do some of the tracks from the Head Voice Webinar, but right now I'm focusing on stretching chest, so the Head Voice tracks will have to wait. I'm working on strengthening my support and extending my range. Not to mention, I'm ensuring that my basic Open Throat LAH! is really, really what it needs to be, since that is the basic building block of every note that comes from our voice!
Don't worry, Cyon! I'll be posting lots of demos as I get myself on track with my basic foundation. There is so much room for growth, it's almost staggering to think about, but really exciting at the same time! I'm really having a blast working Ken's program, and feel like I'm on the verge of a number of breakthroughs with my voice. I'm so glad I found KTVA and that it really is all that it's cracked up to be!