evalute please

Hi, I know it may seem foolish but please if you could evaluate this very short sining of mine (I am the male voice). I believe to have absolutely no skill in singing. I just want to know if that short verse is in tune. Please be very honest!
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The sounds, and the pitch shifted voice make it hard to hear just your voice also.
Peace, Tony