A FEW NEW DEMOS
sealrose
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Hi Bob Tom again. Here are a few new tunes I recorded and mixed today....Hope you like.
Cheers and stay safe and well in Oregon....Tom
Cant help fallin in love
Raindrops keep fallin on my head
Make it with you
Condemnation
Cheers and stay safe and well in Oregon....Tom
Cant help fallin in love
Raindrops keep fallin on my head
Make it with you
Condemnation
Comments
Can't Help - The bridges on the notes for "Like a" aren't quite right. Those same 2 notes wherever they are in the bridges aren't quite right. Also, I would suggest you tie the notes together more, like instead of shall... I... Stay... Link the lyrics together like a string of pearls. ShaaaaalAyeeeeeeeeeeStaaaaaaaaaay.
Raindrops sounds pretty good, but you chop some of the last notes of phrases where it would be nice if you sustain them instead. Again, remember the string of pearls.
Make it : Good job. One problem note, where you say "ON Rainbows at 0:29, the ON is off.
Condemnation. Good job.
Thanks for your support. Tom