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It’s Never too Late to Start Over New

SnavetapSnavetap 2.0 PRO Posts: 38
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Hi Guys

Would love to get your feedback on this song I recorded. Thanks!

Pat

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_57xI63yYOlfRf6TEMu4dWtU1Oad1LQU/view?usp=drivesdk

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  • WigsWigs Moderator, 2.0 PRO, 3.0 Streaming Posts: 5,042
    edited May 2020
    I seem to have trouble accessing the file on my phone.
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  • SnavetapSnavetap 2.0 PRO Posts: 38
    Sorry. Let me repost the link

    https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_57xI63yYOlfRf6TEMu4dWtU1Oad1LQU/view?usp=drivesdk
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  • SnavetapSnavetap 2.0 PRO Posts: 38
    I’m not sure why it doesn’t work automatically. When I click on it it says there is a problem accessing the file. Then it asks if I want to download. I say yes and “view” rather than “download” and it seems to work. Sorry for the pain. I’ll try to figure another way.
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  • SnavetapSnavetap 2.0 PRO Posts: 38
    Here it is as an mp3 file. That seems to work

    https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LBZWOxJgGzeP2iUEiHTpB_CgA9qF7E_H/view?usp=drivesdk
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  • wojtekwojtek Pro, 2.0 PRO Posts: 96
    Each time I read the title I think of Never Too Late by Three Days Grace haha - one of my faves.

    To me it sounds a bit too nasal and/or with raised larynx. Not sure, and would like someone else to comment on that.
    Maybe it is a choice that You make? Then it's totally fine I would say ;p

    Also I would try to pronounce the words clearer, I can't understand everything (maybe cause english isn't my native language hah).

    Other than that it's pretty good, I'm not used to listening to this kind of pieces so can't really add more :/

    Keep it up;;)
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  • WigsWigs Moderator, 2.0 PRO, 3.0 Streaming Posts: 5,042
    Yep could hear it this time. Fun little melody, bit of a folk vibe to it. To me the larynx sounds fine, some of the ooh vowels are placed quite forward in your mask, but you don't do this for the entire song, so I think it's more placement related. I like to think of it as using just enough to get resonance without totally relying on it.

    Nice job.
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  • SnavetapSnavetap 2.0 PRO Posts: 38
    Cool! I’ll listen closely and see if I can hear the difference. Thanks for the comments both of you!

    In case you are interested, here is an early version of the song.

    https://youtu.be/co4IBW6YZqY
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