Not too bad, I've pretty much stayed away from anything queen myself. Your pitch is pretty good, the notes you didn't quite hit I think are more a support and vowel placement issue. If you work on growing your chest voice and connecting it with your head you can avoid the tiny chirps that happen through the passagio. Nice work with the guitar as well, I wish I kept it up from my highschool days.
You had some good pockets of resonance in your lower and mid register, honing in on those vowels will really improve it. Good job!
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You had some good pockets of resonance in your lower and mid register, honing in on those vowels will really improve it. Good job!