Mary on a Cross Cover, What are your thoughts?

The most skilled people seem to have left the forum, so I will try to say something with my limited knowledge.
You start off good. Some hesitation in the sound when you begin to ascend. I would try to cut off the air more. On the phrase "and the truth of the matter" you use a lot of it. I think the pitch sounds fine there, but very breathy. Try to hold the breath and sing the phrase with good cord closure.
Like it's said in the couse, the overuse of air is the arch enemy of the vocal cords. If you get that under control I think you will do fine with this song.

Yes, I think this forum is in a die-off mode. Activity has gone down and when people don't get any replies at all they are less likely to return.

Anyway hope you will be able to improve on the Ghost song!