“Under the bridge” demo. Constructive criticism please
Seth_Weihrauch
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I’ve been working on volume 1 for a few months, with a couple week or 2 breaks. This is an easy song to sing, but I can definitely tell I have more strength in my voice now. Let me know what you think and how I can improve. Thanks in advance
https://www.dropbox.com/s/6ueav0xue3ilymt/Under the bridge.m4a?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/6ueav0xue3ilymt/Under the bridge.m4a?dl=0
Comments
what I noticed was that you sound very similar across the whole song, you could maybe add some variation in places. emphasize some word/phrases more than others, for example.
you could do this first part a bit more spoken with shorter vowels, and then be more "sung" in the next part. if that makes any sense.
welcome back again. So I am finally allowed to listen to demo of your voice.
Pretty good job, man. You sounded very good on some spots. At the same time I agree to what out mates mentioned: some spots sound a little bit nasally. On these spots try to smile into the sound and expose your upper theeth. That might help you to keep the sound open.
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