Seven Nation Army (The White Stripes/Postmodern Jukebox cover) by coffeecrank
coffeecrank
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I've been meaning to do this for a long time. I'm starting to get into all these vocal improvs and jazz covers, and this is one hell of a cover originally done by Haley Reinhart & Postmodern Jukebox.
I tried to emulate the style a bit but make the song my own. Did I succeed? You tell me.
https://youtu.be/-9UO8siympc
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I tried to emulate the style a bit but make the song my own. Did I succeed? You tell me.
https://youtu.be/-9UO8siympc
@doc_ramadani @Diego @Vocality @Sophia @blondiewales @Wigs @cwcw @DogMeat @Raphael_Hussl @BarbieLynn @d1g2w3 @samw2019 @Rick_amateur @omkarpancham @maximgottmer @bonvie56 @Furious_Phil @Chris82 @shining @Maya @LumiMoon @iZak @jimmieYYM @heidianita @NickW
Comments
You did a very good job! Congratulations.
In my opinion, maybe you could work more on changing the melody that seemed a bit repetitive sometimes, thinking mostly that you are improvising this song. It could be good if you go ahead and also reach notes outside that range of notes, some notes below the ones you are using (at some times you did it) and also some higher notes. It really sounded good when you adorned with some low note. That kind of mixture of different parts of the register and also varying the melody will give more dynamism and feeling to the song (it is my personal preferences as well). And I also agree with @shining.
But overall, great work on this version of the song! Keep up the good work!
Great job!
Lastly, your tree is still up, it's February! 🤣
Vocality
Agree with the mix, though. Get your voice more blended in the music and I will consider to buy your record!